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Submitted: March 13, 2005
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Xer and his compatriot of sorts talking about stuff, likely why they are currently sitting outside in an alley (as indicated by clichéed fire in metal barrel and stack of newspapers). A scene from a story I had once planned to draw, and may try to draw if I think it's still any good, and if I can remember how to draw Xer's and his friend's faces.

I drew it a while ago, and my friend Melissa coloured it for me with coloured pencils since I like her raw colouring style, as opposed to mine.
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~renko369:iconrenko369: Mar 13, 2005, 8:51:54 PM
I like it but I have a few critisizms. The person laying down is perfect but the one with the green cloak needs a little work. His head is a little too big and his hand is in an akward position. Also he is not looking at the person laying down, if they are talking then they would more than likley have eye contact.

Other than that nice job. The shading is great and again there are no flaws with the person laying down.
8/10 overall

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~miari-trunks:iconmiari-trunks: Mar 13, 2005, 8:59:16 PM
Thanks for the comment.

I have a hard time drawing faces and hands. I agree that the head and the hand are messed up, and this follows the pattern of my issues with drawing faces and hands. Although with the lack of eye contact, I'd argue that point on character, but since you don't know his character, I understand your point. Thanks again :)
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